SOUTH HAVEN
Autumn
October
hunched along the eastern shore of Lake Michigan
like an abandoned child
South Haven waits for summer’s return
My wife and I
stroll the streets
now reticent and barren
like the beach itself
sulking behind the buildings
where seagulls screech their impudent calls
as they prepare their escape
from the looming
hostile Michigan winter
Along the beach
rows of gift shops
tee shirt shops
fast food cafes
sit shuttered and dark
rejects to the changing season
that leaves them barren and sequestered
like victims of a dreaded disease
The sound of our footsteps
ring past the seaside inns,
their blinds drawn against blank windows
the season’s dust settling like a plague
over unused furniture
closeted like unwanted dogs
behind locked doors
The clouds
like charcoal smudges
across a translucent canvas
wallow in their own reverie
hang
then drift eastward
over jade waters churned
by the rebuke of fall’s stiletto winds
South Haven
lives for the drone of motorboats
skiers in tow,
and the background chorus of tourists
in their flip flops and shorts,
hot hands clutching cold drinks
watching their kids scurry to the lake
like berserk lemmings
But as the inevitable cycle
plays itself out,
one last gull paces the beach
looks westward
and anticipates an arduous flight to the sun
as autumn bites
at its wings
Do you rewrite before publishing? I would have altered a couple of phrases. A really good poem slightly tainted with "abandoned child", "dreaded disease", and "settling like a plague". More than compensated with "seagulls screech their impudent calls", "clouds like charcoal smudges", "rebuke of fall’s stiletto winds", and my favorite "scurry to the lake like berserk lemmings".
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